66. *2023/01/08 02:25
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>>65.Linkeanna
>С Рождеством Христовым, Миша!
Пасиб!
И тебя с Рождеством!
65. * (Linkiea@mail.ru) 2023/01/07 19:01
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С Рождеством Христовым, Миша!
64. (m_voronkov@yahoo.com) 2020/01/25 04:26
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>>63.Post Striatum
>с финальным забегом в этой новогодней мыльной опере!
>всего! и обнимашки -- муррр :))
>
Пасиб!
63. *2020/01/13 15:28
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с финальным забегом в этой новогодней мыльной опере!
всего! и обнимашки -- муррр :))
62. * (Linkiea@mail.ru) 2020/01/07 23:02
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Merry Christmas! Happy New Year!!!
:-)
61. (hstar@mail.tomsknet.ru) 2008/06/18 09:56
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Unreserved admiration. 10 point
60. (cmatroskin@yahoo.com) 2006/11/21 19:33
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>>59.Voronkov Michael
>>That's the first thing that comes to mind.
>Fair enough. It just felt that way :-( I was told that this is how people talk. I just dropped all the "erhh", "khm" and "you know". Most of them.
They do, actually, but when you put it in writing it just makes the whole thing a bit convoluted. You did not write the rest of the text like that, did you?
>You would not be a literature major?
God, no!
59. (m_voronkov@yahoo.com) 2006/11/21 18:17
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>>58.J
>>>57.Voronkov Michael
>>>>56.J
>>>Interesting.
>>>
>>>I liked everything except for the first paragraph :)
>>I'm getting a lot of grief about it. What would you change? Seriously?
>Look at how your sentences begin.
>"To tell you the truth", "I bet", "I guess", "In fact", "Sure"
>Five out of the first six начинаются вводной фразой (хм, как "вводная фраза" по-английски? :) anyway...). Doesn't that seem too much to you?
>That's the first thing that comes to mind.
Fair enough. It just felt that way :-( I was told that this is how people talk. I just dropped all the "erhh", "khm" and "you know". Most of them.
You would not be a literature major?
58. (cmatroskin@yahoo.com) 2006/11/21 18:11
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>>57.Voronkov Michael
>>>56.J
>>Interesting.
>>
>>I liked everything except for the first paragraph :)
>I'm getting a lot of grief about it. What would you change? Seriously?
Look at how your sentences begin.
"To tell you the truth", "I bet", "I guess", "In fact", "Sure"
Five out of the first six начинаются вводной фразой (хм, как "вводная фраза" по-английски? :) anyway...). Doesn't that seem too much to you?
That's the first thing that comes to mind.
57. (m_voronkov@yahoo.com) 2006/11/21 18:04
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>>56.J
>Interesting.
>
>I liked everything except for the first paragraph :)
I'm getting a lot of grief about it. What would you change? Seriously?